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Post by Amaya on Jul 9, 2008 14:30:10 GMT -5
General Information Name: Amaya Brea Kaname Nickname: Amaya Age: 16 Gender: Female Date of Birth: June 4 Place of Birth: Texas, America Ethnicity: English Sexual Preference: Straight Relatives: Mother, Grandmother Affiliation: Embryo, Hope. Grade: 11th
AppearancePersonality: Amaya is out there, to put it simply, she loves video games and loves to be different, she has a unique fashion sense like keeping her hair up in different places, she also wears unusual clothes; like her kimono to school. She is the opposite of her chara; unconfident, self-doubting, and loud or abnoxious. She can get very jealous if she likes someone and they dont pay attention to her, she feels left out at times, like she doesnt belong with her family or friends or anyone. She wants to become more like Tsubasa (AS IVE STATED IN HER HISTORY) Eye Color: Greenish Blue. Hair Color: Long, Medium Brown. Height: 5"7' Weight: Ask and get slapped. Build: Slender
Miscellaneous InformationHistory: Amaya was born in Texas in a small house in the country, she grew up with horses and loved them dearly, but when she moved to Japan, she was heartbroken when her favorite horse was sold. It was in Japan she met many friends and even got a new horse, but something else was driving her, her wish to be free and be able to change her personality from self-doubting to happy. Thus the next morning, a small egg was found, it was blue and had a wind marking on it shaped like a swirl, it also had wings on it and the sign of Hope (you know what it is Bien). It wasnt to long after that Tsubasa was born, Tsubasa was everything Amaya wasnt: Didnt doubt herself, confident, and quiet. Slowly, Amaya wanted to become like Tsubasa, but it will take a while. Summer soon came and it meant mosquitos and pool-time. Amaya now enjoys the rest of her summer, while waiting for the school year to begin for her junior year. This year will be like no other. Other: Nope. Roleplay Sample: It was a warm summer day and everyone was out and about, except for Amaya who was sitting on a hill, doing nothing. She wore a simple blue t-shirt with blue jean shorts, her brown hair fell over her shoulders in pigtails. Yawning, she was flanked by a small chara chara called Tsubasa. "Unno, Amaya..." Tsubasa said as Amaya looked at her. "I sense another chara chara nearby..." Amaya smiled. "Then lets go greet them shall we?" She asked standing up, streching she took off down the hill with her chara chara flying behind.
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Post by Bien on Jul 9, 2008 19:46:49 GMT -5
Personality and history needs to be longer. And you do need a RP sample sorry. Also in your history you put you are being protected by the knights? I am only allowing as of now the Embryo Egg of Love to be with the knights. Also describe your egg in your history so I have an idea of what kind of egg you want me to make for you.
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Post by Amaya on Jul 10, 2008 4:39:18 GMT -5
Fixed.
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Post by Bien on Jul 10, 2008 9:06:14 GMT -5
I love ya Ashley to death but out of all the profiles I am dissapointed in its yours. I think you have the ability to make your history atleast 2 paragraphs and your personality more then 4 sentences.
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Post by Amaya on Jul 10, 2008 9:38:11 GMT -5
FIXED -hypervenelate-
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Post by Bien on Jul 10, 2008 9:39:41 GMT -5
Xd what about putting in your personality the type of person she wants to be, I don't see that anywhere.
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Post by Amaya on Jul 10, 2008 9:43:19 GMT -5
...>_> You notice ze little things. I SEE HOW YOU ARE MDEAR.
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Post by Bien on Jul 10, 2008 9:44:33 GMT -5
Smacks. The little things are what makes a profile the best it can be.
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Post by Amaya on Jul 10, 2008 9:45:23 GMT -5
;-; Your crueeel.
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Post by Bien on Jul 10, 2008 9:45:37 GMT -5
Accepted
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